Author’s note: My cause and effect from the book "The City of Ember" by Jeanne DuPrau.
The builders created an underground
city called Ember, for the safety of the people from the outside world. Over
time; the city has become worn down, power outages are common, most of the
people live in their own waste, and the city is running out of supplies. Everybody
wants to get out of the city, and two people figure out how to escape. Doon and
Linda solved a ripped up note that has directions to lead the citizens of Ember
to the outer world. Then just as they solved the note, the government of Ember
issues warrants for their arrests. They were not able to share the information
with all of the citizens, because they need to leave. The reason the government
wants them arrested is because, they spread malicious lies about the mayor. As
the result of the events of solving the note and insulting the mayor; the
government forced Doon and Linda to
leave Ember.
You did okay with this piece but I think you need to make it longer to describe more things. You did really good with describing things considering the length. Good Job with that.
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